Friday, 8 June 2018

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Hello, my name is Lucca. I live in Gisborne, NZ. I go to Makauri School. I like to climb trees. I am very good at speeches. I won year four first place last year in speeches.
I am good at soccer. This year I want to be better at writing.
This year I am looking forward to the production. My mum inspires me because she very kind ot people and she is nice to me.

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  1. Matt22 June 2018 at 09:54

    Hi Lucca
    I really liked how you did your profile so well, I also really liked how you said you were looking forward to the production I am too.

    I also liked how you put what you need to work on as well as your strengths. well done great work.

    Just a little something to work on for next time, just double check what you have written before you post it but apart from that good work.

    From Matt Mckendry Room B

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  2. Anonymous31 July 2018 at 14:37

    Kia ora, I am Kathleen from Te Hapara School.
    I really liked that you won your age group speech.
    I learnt that you really like writing.
    Maybe you could use more detail in your writing next time.
    If you would like to see my learning visit my blog here

    Mā te wā
    Kathleen

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  3. Anonymous6 August 2018 at 09:46

    Kia ora, I am Ella from Matawai School.
    It’s so cool how you won first place in the speech comp last year, you must be really good.
    I learnt that you like to climb trees and that your mum inspires you.
    Maybe you could explain how you would like to get better at writing.
    If you would like to see my learning visit my blog https://matawaiellak.blogspot.com/

    Mā te wā
    Ella

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    1. Anonymous10 August 2018 at 10:01

      Hello Ella thank you for your feedback I appreciate it.

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